Comments for In Diegesis

Comment on Vainglory (for Dean Ferraro) by toes

toes — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 05:58:18 +0000

I really fucking like this story.

Comment on I’ve been waiting all day for this by mw

mw — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 05:16:22 +0000

this is funny and moving and and and

Comment on A part of the whole is a synecdoche of true love by mw

mw — Fri, 20 Jan 2012 01:06:02 +0000

ahhhhh

Comment on Listen, Moon (for Paul Pattwell) by mw

mw — Fri, 20 Jan 2012 01:04:11 +0000

ooooooo

Comment on At the birthplace of my birthplace by MW

MW — Sun, 22 May 2011 23:41:55 +0000

Glad to hear you’ve been reading Bukowski. I was digging on one of his books my last year living in Philly.

Comment on At the birthplace of my birthplace by MW

MW — Sun, 22 May 2011 23:40:40 +0000

Oooooo this is nice. Not just ideas but imagery conveying ideas. really great line breaks and italicizing.

Comment on Oh You Know by Dean

Dean — Tue, 17 May 2011 15:29:27 +0000

i like this a lot but i liked the title “this poem is a prayer” a little better

Comment on Us Always (The Same) by MW

MW — Sun, 15 May 2011 00:29:26 +0000

Oh, just saw why I left, I had missed that somehow. That one has some of the ‘experimenting’ i was talking bout. that one’s nice too. why is it people i know never seem to talk positively about their hometown? at least not anyone i like to talk to.

Comment on Us Always (The Same) by MW

MW — Sun, 15 May 2011 00:24:35 +0000

Oooo i like the edit. some good line breaks in this one as well. Feel like you should experiment more with spacing words throughout the “page”

Comment on give it up. share. play the game. let’s go somewhere. by Hillman

Hillman — Thu, 10 Mar 2011 17:28:44 +0000

this IS my favorite.

It feels so familiar and yet I believe Ive never read it.

I can hardly understand how Id not read it before today.

FAVORITE> I honestly think Ill need to return to this again and again. keep pushing.